Pegasus Mobius Blaze

Name: Mobius Blaze.

Sex: Male.

Age: Stallion.

Species: Pegasus Pony.

Pelt Color: Pale Gold.

Mane/Tail Color & Style: Burnt orange with natural orange highlights. Medium-long length and usually moderately messy, as though he's in a constant "just got out of bed" state.

Eye Color: Gold.

Cutie Mark: A pair of slightly tilted wings wreathed in or made of flame.

Physique: Tall and somewhat slender, with very slight, almost unnoticeable muscle toning.

Origin: Cloudsdale.

Roleplay Type: FiM/Show "Mane" Equestria Universe.

Occupation: Odd jobs, usually in weather/cloud control.

Motivation: High-speed stunt flying, much to his parents' dismay. He earned his cutie mark after successfully performing a dangerous stunt/obstacle course that included copious quantities of fire, which ultimately also earned him a large number of trips to the Cloudsdale infirmary.

Likes: Flying, star gazing, sleeping, racing, performing stunts, discussing philosophy, tea, coffee, muffins, almost anything vanilla flavored, helping others, goofing off.

Dislikes: Unnecessary austerity, excessive frou-frou behavior/style, genuine jerkiness, "Nothing" arguments, monotony, pointless/malicious/unnecessary lies, self-serving disloyalty, blind self-destructive loyalty, malicious teasing.

Character Summary: The son of a retired stunt flyer (his father) and a mathematician (his mother). His parents gave him his name due to the fact that he was a hyperactive foal, even just after birth. His mother insisted on the name 'Mobius' in reference to his seemingly endless energy, due to the relation of the term to infinity (and because she felt 'Mobius' sounded better than just 'Infinite,' 'Infinity' or 'Lemniscate'). They later added 'Blaze' to his name as he got older, due to his tendency to go even the shortest distances as fast as possible, constantly going at a 'blazing' pace, so to speak.

Mobius was able to fly at a slightly younger age than most foals due to a rare genetic trait that results in abnormally large wings, a trait passed through his family by his great grandsire. However, the energetic and optimistic colt learned the hard way that being different wasn't always a good thing upon attending the Junior Speedsters Flight Camp. He prefers to keep his foalhood to himself, so few know what exactly happened to him. However, it was what ultimately lead to the bright-eyed, hyperactive colt to becoming the laid back (in comparison to his younger self), understanding and usually slow-going stallion he is today.

Mobius continues to reside in Cloudsdale, though he frequently leaves to explore other parts of Equestria, having grown tired of the hustle and bustle of city life. He often frequents Ponyville, due to the hospitable, kind nature of its inhabitants and its tranquility. With no real set job, he usually looks for odd work where a Pegasus is needed, often helping with cloud/weather control or, in rare cases, acting as a courier for special deliveries.

The gold pegasus has what some might call a peculiar manner of speaking. He often cuts words short or runs them together, even if it isn't proper to do so, such as using just " 'n " instead of "and" or substituting a simple " t' " in place of "to." However, he has no drawl or real accent despite his informal manner of speaking. He oddly - or perhaps deliberately - takes on a much more austere, proper form of speaking when dealing with a particularly serious issue, or when his sincerity is called into question.

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I would like to note to any admins/moderators checkin' this that I'd much prefer for the last part'a my summary (the bit about current residence) to have Mobius living in Ponyville. I altered it so that he's still in his place of origin after reading the "Character Residences" post (missed it while I was making my profile ) because I didn't know if the intent of that post was for the "Origins" part to be spread out, or because you want the ponies to technically be living in other places than Ponyville.

Not a big thing, but if possible, I'd much prefer Mobius to be currently living in - or well, on the outskirts of - Ponyville. If not, then I understand.

Ooooh quite the unique character you got here. I wasn't to sure about his cutie-mark till it was explained so that's fine although I would wish for a more detailed event as to how it all started well not to detailed just a little flashback sort of thing. What are his other hobbies if any? Oh and we do not use numbers for ages due to the fact that we don't know how a pony ages or how long they live so if you could please change the age to stallion that would be lovely. Other than that this looks great! Keep up the good work. :heart:

Oh, apologies about the age thing. I re-read the OC creation post to see if I missed anything and I did. I was pretty worn out last night. Fixed the age thing.

As for the explanations, I went into greater depth on his early years and whatnot when I first wrote the summary, but then decided to replace them with something a lil more vague but plausible for two reasons. 1) I wanted to keep some things relatively mysterious in order to maybe inspire curiosity in those I RP with and to allow for the possibility of bonding via opening up, s'well as character development and 2) If I left it, the summary would be nearly twice as long, so I figured I'd better cut it down a bit.

I'd be happy to add hobbies, but I'm not entirely sure where to fit them in at. I tried to use the Likes section as a place for a few (such as performing stunts or discussing philosophy), but didn't know what would fit and what wouldn't.

Anyways... thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you like him. I was worried about reactions, particularly to the whole "abnormally large wings" thing. I just liked those style of wings in comparison to the smaller, normal sized pegasus wings, but realized in an RP based on the show, they would be quite odd. I hope my explanation for them is sufficient.

Well it looks like everything is checked out.

And the wings are fine you made it work like it was more of a disease/ genetic mutation whatever you wish to call it and worked it so that it didn't give him to many advantages but also gave him a few set backs.

I approve!

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Eee!

And as for the advantages/set backs, they allow him to move significantly faster than other pegasi that're average/slightly above average his size (though not like "rainbooms go off everytime he flaps his wings" fast ) and allow him to glide for longer distances. If he isn't mindful of them, though, he can be quite a bit of a clutz (knocking stuff over, getting them caught on things, tripping over them if they're drooping, etc.). He also can't exactly fly through narrower areas as easy as other pegasi, usually grounding him when it comes to navigating tight corridors, such as city alleyways or narrrow streets.

I knew you'd know how to make these wings work

Can't wait to see you around on the RP section!

No matter where your pony is from, they can roleplay anywhere in Equestria. We just want to have ponies come from all over the world, not all born in/live in Ponville.

No matter where your pony is from, they can roleplay anywhere in Equestria. We just want to have ponies come from all over the world, not all born in/live in Ponville.

I understand. I can deal with that.

Thanks for the approve!

I edited my profile slightly. Mostly just updated the pic since I found the Full Version of the pony creator and actually got to get the style I wanted. Nothing serious; everything else is the same, just a mild difference in appearance. If it's not okay, I still have the other pic and can switch it back.