PyroBlaze Posted July 16, 2016 Report Share Posted July 16, 2016 Name: Liviel Mizu Sex: Female Age: Adult Species: Diamond Dog (Hokkaido) Eye Color: Blue Character Color: White fur Mane/Tail: She has her hair in a ponytail, hanging behind her so as to not get in the way. Physique: Liviel is of typical height for a female Diamond dog, with a body that is lithe and has the musculature gained from the practice of martial arts and the exercises involved in that. She has scars, but they are not noticeable through her fur. She wears a simple white gi with blue wave patterns on it, as well as matching pants. Residence: Mostly travels, but the Fenghuang Monastery will always be home to her. Occupation: Lives off the land, teaching martial arts from time to time as she travels. Cutie Mark: N/A Unique Traits: She has skill with martial arts, both unarmed and with her weapon of choice, a Nagitana. History: Parents are not something that Liviel got to experience, not really. They took care of her for a time, according to her caretakers, but she had no memory of them and the only thing they left her was her name. As such, she grew up in and around the monastery, playing in the nature that surrounded the site and exploring her little world. As she grew older, she began to notice that some residents would leave and not come back, and new ones would come and not leave for quite some time. She learned this was because they were students of the monks, and from then on she wanted to be a student as well. The day when she would be old enough couldn't come fast enough for her, and she would often be in the background of lessons, copying the movements. Then one day, it happened. She joined the monastery as a student instead of simply their charge to raise. It was during these early years of training that Liviel met the future empress, a friend she would never forget. Throughout her training, she excelled at the martial arts portion, and she soon realized what she would do to help maintain balance. She would fight for those that could not and teach those that could but didn't know how. Of course, she did not shirk her other studies or her responsibilities, but her main focus now was the honing of her martial arts. She always made time for friends though, especially when they needed help, even if it meant not finishing her task and getting in trouble from her teachers. In time, she became an Annointed Follower, like so many before her, and she reluctantly left the only home she had ever known, to spread what she had learned wherever she could find that needed it. There was no boundary to her journey, and her goal was to visit every place that would have her to teach and protect. Personality: Liviel is a very friendly dog, only fighting in defense of herself or others. She prefers to resolve disputes peacefully, and will try to talk it out before resorting to fighting. In this manner, she is a flowing river, going along her way peacefully. That being said though, she is a rock when it comes to her morales, unwilling to budge an inch on them. When she does fight though, she becomes a raging river, giving no rest. It is much easier to be her friend than her enemy, as you simply have to not be fighting her friends to not be considered her enemy. She is fairly intelligent, speaking just as well as anyone else in her situation. She is also fiercely loyal, and will stick to her friends until the end. She is not one for fancy adornments or elaborate clothing, preferring her gi and her nagitana to be her outfit. Summary: A friendly, loyal dog, Liviel is uncompromising in her beliefs and unwavering in her convictions to protect those she has deemed in need or her friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 17, 2016 Report Share Posted July 17, 2016 This looks good to me! My only concern is your reference to "people" in the history section. Perhaps ponies...or something of the like? I'll send this in for second review Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted July 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2016 1 hour ago, RainbowFoxxy said: My only concern is your reference to "people" in the history section. Perhaps ponies...or something of the like? Dunno what else I'd use to refer to just individuals in general. I'm not talking about just ponies, it's any race. Thanks for looking it over though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 17, 2016 Report Share Posted July 17, 2016 Perhaps "ponies or others"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted July 18, 2016 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2016 I changed it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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